• so, i am writing a love story about a couple, they married too young, at 16-17. so the girl gets pregnant and is abandon by the guy . To make things short,
    am i setting a bad example for marrying them too young?
    I donâ ™t want my readers to think this is alright. These people suffer because of this, but meet again in a couple of years and find out they werenâ ™t separate by destiny but by her fathers evil plot.
    I know is impossible to get marry at sixteen butâ ¦its fantasy I can do whatever, also the story has to do a lot with my personal life, leaving home too young because my father beat on me too damn much. But I got lucky, unlike others, together my husband and I finish college (his mother was an still is awesome) and we had our first baby three years ago at 22.

    but this is not about me but my story, am i setting a bad example? this couple will marry young, and get old then meet again then find out the father separated them intentionally.


  • If you pull the book thru the fact that people can pull them selfs thru the most horrible situations. Its okay

    If it ends up with a happy ending that has to do with romance....your setting a bad example


  • No, I do think that you are setting a bad example. Because you are not romanticizing the fact that these child got married young; you are discussing the hardship that they will go through. Plus, the sad truth is that even if children are not getting married at sixteen (which I am sure that some try), they are making decisions that cause them to grow up way too fast. So IMO your story will hold more truth than fantasy. And who knows, your story might even make some teens who think they are already grown think again.